Class 3 session 05: *Revision*

Last comments for this piece were:
-Pacing of the shot overall, its losing momentum on how it builds up, eliminate the pauses.
-Hands should be moving from slow to fast to faster.
-"take" should be sharper to keep up the pace
-Walk should be slower to contrast the emotions
-Resolve how he pivots on his right foot, now it feels sticky.

Still needs polish, I'll do it later down the road not now. We've been asked to abandon this piece and move on.

:)