Class 5 Session 3: Story pitch video finalists
Here are the ideas that people liked the best, surprisingly; "Bye, Bye" has gotten everyone's attention. Both have been modified from their original version based on your comments.
"The hole in the wall" will have to be in the waiting list due to a time constraint, it will need more than a minute to comunicate clearly.
Which one do you like from these 2?


1 Comments:
yo mario, Its brian from AM.(although currently on break) Very well thoughtout story ideas. I love em. um... to pick I'd suggest you do Bye Bye. Although both are clever I believe that idea is relatable to everyone, and just seems to have more punch with the ending. Less ambiguous I guess. see ya...
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